Tuesday, 22 April 2014

The Letter

I often muse on the fact that a house never gets lifeless and very surprisingly,when humans leave it one by one;the greeny creatures creep in.I don’t know the names of the herbs my house now got surrounded by, but their roots are deep in.I feel peace to see the house,still breathing.


What would be the name of the mall you will make out of this house?See,I am here,sitting on your childhood study-chair.Did you notice it?Do you remember?How I longed to see, how you look like being a ‘man’!I am so happy today.Sometimes life can’t give you what death can.

Love-Baba


P.S.- Written for www.100wordstory.org for a 100 word story contest where this above picture was the prompt given for the story.
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  1. sumantra das22 April 2014 at 05:53

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  2. Unknown22 April 2014 at 06:35

    Very Well written more importantly very well thought...

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  3. Ekti pakhir ichchedana23 April 2014 at 01:23

    Thoughtful....precise....good....carry on dear....keep writing

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  4. Anonymous23 April 2014 at 03:08

    very consice....full of thoughts....i think soon we will see the other side of the coin in some other place.... :P

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  5. sumantra das23 April 2014 at 03:41

    Super writing as always..but the main twist is to write a short story for the first time within a limited words. and again a master stroke...... very well composed..very emotional .... In one word....."TOOFAN"

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  6. App Development Mumbai22 February 2017 at 01:40

    Blogging is the new poetry. I find it wonderful and amazing in many ways.

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