Tuesday 22 April 2014

The Letter

I often muse on the fact that a house never gets lifeless and very surprisingly,when humans leave it one by one;the greeny creatures creep in.I don’t know the names of the herbs my house now got surrounded by, but their roots are deep in.I feel peace to see the house,still breathing.


What would be the name of the mall you will make out of this house?See,I am here,sitting on your childhood study-chair.Did you notice it?Do you remember?How I longed to see, how you look like being a ‘man’!I am so happy today.Sometimes life can’t give you what death can.

Love-Baba


P.S.- Written for www.100wordstory.org for a 100 word story contest where this above picture was the prompt given for the story.

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  2. Very Well written more importantly very well thought...

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  3. Thoughtful....precise....good....carry on dear....keep writing

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  4. very consice....full of thoughts....i think soon we will see the other side of the coin in some other place.... :P

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  5. Super writing as always..but the main twist is to write a short story for the first time within a limited words. and again a master stroke...... very well composed..very emotional .... In one word....."TOOFAN"

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  6. Blogging is the new poetry. I find it wonderful and amazing in many ways.

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